Don't toil or stress over the writing of your medical school personal statement.
I can dig into your medical school essay and ensure it's up to par so you can get an interview.
Not to brag, but my superpower is writing and editing.
Over 95% of students who work with me to completion of their personal statements get admitted. Wouldn't you like those odds for yourself?
Seriously, I can make you my next success story.
All you have to do is come to me with your "finished" (5,300 character) personal statement and then I get to work making all the edits, revisions and changes so you can get a medical school interview invite.
In virtually all cases your final essay is going to be totally different from what you started out with.
Because I've been editing personal statements for more years than I care to admit and most students continually make the same mistakes over and over in their personal statements.
So if I'm seeing these mistakes in the hundreds of medical school essays I edit, just imagine what AdComs see time and time with the thousands of statements they read each application cycle.
But you're in good hands because my years of editing will ensure you avoid all the common pitfalls that can totally derail your essay.
My process is very simple and here's what it consists of:
First, I do a general read of your personal statement to get a sense of what overall impression you make.
Then I systemically go through my editing checklist to ensure no stone is left unturned.
This is much more than a basic grammar and spell check editing service.
I dive deep into your personal statement starting with the opening sentence to ensure it immediately grabs your reader's attention from the get-go. Then I ensure there are seamless transitions between each paragraph.
Talking about paragraphs I'm going to make sure the content of your essay is up to medical school admission standards. I find a lot of premeds talk about the same topics in their personal statements and it sabotages their chances of getting admitted.
Case in point...
I don't need to hear about how Dr. Jones is a great doctor who spends time carefully explaining things to patients, he has an excellent bedside manner, how very knowledgable he is, how he always takes the time to teach you and ultimately you want to be just like Dr. Jones when you're a practicing doctor.
What you just did is give me a glowing recommendation of Dr. Jones but this did nothing to help YOU get into medical school.
Remember you're writing to showcase to AdComs why you deserve to be admitted so don't lose sight of this overall purpose of your personal statement.
Another point, I will make sure you haven't just submitted a resume in paragraph form.
If I can find content in another part of your medical school application then you best believe I will tell you to cut it or edit it down. With only 5,300 characters you want every word to be meaningful and advance the story of who you are as a person.
Since these are all factors that are going through my mind plus plenty more you can realize just how thorough I am when working on your medical school essay.
There's a reason for why your final personal statement will almost be a complete 180 degree difference from when you started.
Trust me, the investment is totally worth it.
You'll be walking away with a personal statement that tells your story in the most compelling way possible and moves the needle towards you being offered an acceptance.
In a nutshell that's my job.
To do whatever editing of your medical school personal statement so you walk away with an essay that is uniquely yours, highlights all your attributes for a career in medicine and makes you a very relatable individual that AdComs want to meet in person by granting you a medical school interview.
If that's not exciting then I don't know what else to tell you.
You can finally stop typing, scratching your head, doing a million and one revisions and not knowing if you're getting any closer to a medical school essay that AdComs will thoroughly enjoy reading.
Trust, the care of your personal statement to me and together we'll craft a masterpiece that will blow away the competition and put you one step closer to being a doctor!